1. When I lived in Germany, it ...

1.       When
I lived in Germany, it was possible for me to be without a car, because I could
go everywhere by bus or train, too; although, ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:45 AM it was certainly not so
comfortable and flexible like going by an own delete "an own" -Kim 3/31/09 8:46 AM car.

TRANSITIONAL EXPRESSIONS ---    independent thought. Transition, independent thought.

                                I like ice cream. However, it makes me sick.

                                I like ice cream; however, it makes me sick.

ex:

however,

on the other hand,

in contrast,

despite this fact,

SUBORDINATORS ---    subordinator dependent thought, independent thought

                                independent thought   subordinator independent thought

                                Although I like ice cream, it makes me sick.

                                Ice cream makes me sick although I like it.

ex:

because

if

when

after

since

while

although

 

2.       However, we cannot know everything when we were born. We must have learned thousands of
things till now.

independent idea, independent idea = not possible

independent idea, AND/BUT/SO independent idea = correct

independent idea. Independent idea = correct

 

3.       Since ^ -Kim 3/31/09 8:47 AM came in ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:48 AM America , i c -Kim 3/31/09 8:48 AM found tense -Kim 3/31/09 8:48 AM many essential things which provide convenience for
life , such as the skill of driving , delete ',' and add something -Kim 3/31/09 8:48 AM speaking English fluently .

 

ITEMS in a SERIES

X and/or Y            dog and cat, in the house and on the floor

                            EXCEPT COMPLETE IDEAS/IND. CLAUSES:    I like Mike, and he likes me.

X, Y(,) and/or Z

X, Y, Z(,) and/or Q

 

4.       For
this reason and more , I thing sp -Kim 3/31/09 8:49 AM that speaking english c -Kim 3/31/09 8:49 AM is the most important
thing I learned , because I need it more evreyday. sp, 2 words -Kim 3/31/09 8:49 AM 

 

5.       When
I was grown up, my father told me: "You must prefer suffering losses yourself to profiting from other people because it's very bad for a man that like the small cheap. 'like the small cheap' = ? unclear -Kim 3/31/09 8:50 AM 

 

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6.       Learning
this language aids a person during his ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM travels and will facilitate his ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM communication with other people.

 

7.       Add
to all of that ^ art -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM student well sp -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM be more confident , improve his/her listen's wf -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM skill, ^ -Kim 3/31/09 8:51 AM calm on exams, and ^ -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM intelligent in most education subject. # -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM 

 

8.       Last
year, when I graduated from senior high school. p -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM We had tow sp -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM months vacation.

 

9.       In
my opinion p -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM this was the most important experience that taught me how to work
and deal with people different than you. ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM 

 

10.    Because ^ -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM my love of English, I decide tense -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM to come to another country and continue my
wonderful life to know the outside world.

 

11.    Music
had educated ? wrong subject -Kim 3/31/09 8:53 AM when I was a young child: about 50 years ago, in Korea, there are tense -Kim 3/31/09 8:52 AM a little bit 'a little bit' = ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:53 AM houses that furnished a piano.

 

12.    It
gives not only to delete -Kim 3/31/09 8:53 AM the opportunity to make new friends, delete  -Kim 3/31/09 8:53 AM and to help foreign
people, but also it provides the opportunities to visit amazing countries which ^ -Kim 3/31/09 8:54 AM so far from my country such as USA, Japan and Australia because I like the ww -Kim 3/31/09 8:54 AM travel to countries.